A medical-device seed raise, a digital-health Series C, and an enterprise repositioning. Different rooms, same problem: the audience couldn’t follow the story. Here’s what changed.
Haelo was raising a Pre-Series A round with a genuinely complex, clinically-led story. The science and the model were sound: but the original deck asked investors to assemble the opportunity themselves, slide by slide. The brief: distil it into one clear, compelling narrative that lands on the first read.
“An integrated, clinically-validated sleep health platform addressing multiple touchpoints across the patient journey.”
“We fix the sleep problem the health system keeps missing.”
“They distilled complex ideas into a clear, compelling narrative that resonated with investors and played an important role in successfully raising a $5M round.”
Bradley Smith, Founder & CEO (Haelo Sleep Clinic)
The result we created
A pan through selected slides from the final Pre-Series A presentation.
Under tight timelines, Omegro needed to reposition as the definitive leader in enterprise asset management for high-stakes acquisition conversations. The ask wasn’t a prettier deck: it was strategic messaging with the authority to land in the room, plus a playbook the BD team could use the next day.
“We back great people and help good businesses grow across our portfolio.”
“The home for enterprise asset management leaders: and the operating system behind them.”
“Not a pretty deck, but strategic messaging built to resonate in high-stakes deals… the confidence to challenge our thinking in exactly the right ways. Most importantly, our BD team could put them to work immediately.”
Lynne Salmon, Global Marketing Executive (Omegro)
The result we created
Omegro was a full slide redesign: a pan through the new system.
The original offer deck was a strong but dense first draft: built to explain everything the product could do. At Series C, that’s the wrong story. We sat down with the founding team in a working discovery session to find what the round was really about, then rebuilt the deck around it.
“An innovative platform improving outcomes through a comprehensive, technology-led approach.”
“It works. Now fund the scale: here’s exactly what the capital buys.”
The result we created
A pan through selected slides from the redesigned investor deck.
In their words
Founders and CEOs across medtech, mining, finance and enterprise: on what it actually changed, in their own words.
“To secure a deal it would typically take us two hours of work. Since working with The Unspoken Pitch, it reduced our close time to less than an hour.”
“Outreach to nearly a thousand senior finance executives: and we’ve seen an 11.9% open rate and 2.2% click rate. Solid traction in a highly competitive space.”
“Our last presentation was a six out of ten. What we have now is a slick presentation that represents the brand as a top-tier brand: our people are very excited about it.”
“We’ve sent it out to investors and gotten positive reactions. Several investors commented that we’d answered all the questions and covered all the bases: we’re still engaged with the people we’ve contacted.”
“We’ve already started distributing the new deck, and the response has been overwhelmingly positive. Investors are genuinely interested and engaged.”
“They gave really valuable advice on how to improve our pitch. As a result, we’ve secured a really big opportunity to pitch to a large potential client.”
“The template established more confidence in our largest accounts: a significant increase in the lifetime value of our campaigns with two of our highest-paying organisations.”
“With a very fast turnaround, after only two revisions we had a completed deck that was very well received by our potential investors. I’m sure we’ll use them on our next fundraise.”
“Since implementing the new materials, we’ve noted an increased level of engagement in our services from a broad array of sophisticated investors and corporate clients.”
Quoted verbatim from public LinkedIn recommendations. Outcomes are the clients’ own.
Your story, next
If your deck is buried under your own expertise, that’s exactly the work we do. Tell us what you’re raising for or selling, and we’ll take a look.
Engagements shown with permission. Client testimonials are quoted verbatim from public reviews. We attribute outcomes to our clients: their results are their own; our job is to make the case impossible to miss.
